I know the truth, so don’t bother me with facts
Significant idea: People are easily deceived by rumors and lies
Claim: People instead of seeing the real facts of the situation on their own .They rather base themselves with what other people show or say to them.
Reasons: we are easily manipulated by pictures and stories on the newspaper or magazines.
Thesis: I agree with Jeffrey Kluger in “I know the truth, so don’t bother me with facts “ because it doesn’t matter how much the real truth is out there to be seen. As long as we choose to see it and believe it in our own way, then nothing is going to change the way we think.
Not there yet. Your reasons are still Kluger's, and your claim+ reasons does not yet = thesis.
ReplyDeleteCheck the two blog responses I put on my blog to get a better idea of what we're looking for.